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剧本 2005-06-28 08:22:54

8 INT. OFFICE -NIGHT 8

SAM试着打电话给ANN。但是电话进入留言箱。

SAM
嗨ANN，阿SAM啊，请回电给我，保重啊，
死傻婆。

SAM开始担心ANN。

SAM打了个喷嚏。她伤风了。

9 INT. APARTMENT CORRIDOR -NIGHT 9

SAM从升降机走出来。她伤风了，用纸巾抹鼻涕。忽然看见ANN靠在她
的公寓门前，哭着。之前在走廊出现过的守卫也在，他站在ANN附近。

SAM快步走向ANN。ANN示意守卫走开。SAM一如往常对守卫视若无睹。
守卫走开。

SAM
怎么没有打电话给我？

ANN擦拭眼泪。望向走廊尽头。

SAM
好吗?我以为你生气我了。

ANN看着SAM，微笑，然后轻轻摇头。

SAM
你等了很久吗？

ANN
才一下子罢了。

SAM
肚子饿吗?

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Dear Chui Mei,

I like the way you make things appear several times to introduce some connectivity into the movie - the broken door knobs, the security guards, the phone calls. These stuff paints a realistic daily life.

Certain details could be improved. It's very unlikely that when you switch on the radio, you would hear Indian music. Radio channels are usually properly preset these days. It would be more realistic to play some noisy rock music.

Had you written this script before The Six Senth and The Others (Nicole Kidman), you would've been a fucking genius.

Good luck to your film career. I'm sure you will get more and more awards.

steviee_boy [訪客] 2005-10-12 @ 21:28

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