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剧本 2005-06-28 08:22:54

12 INT. BEDROOM -MOMENTS LATER 12

两人坐在床边。

SAM
你不要吓我啦。

ANN
真的。那个老婆婆，坐在我旁边，然后这样
摇。

ANN前后摇晃身体，

SAM忽然觉得浑身不自在，她站起来。

SAM
ANN，不要这样。

ANN叫SAM静下来。

ANN
你听到吗？

SAM
什么声音？

ANN走到墙边。

ANN
过来。

ANN把耳朵贴在墙上。SAM走过去，也跟ANN一样把耳朵贴在墙上。

ANN看着SAM。

ANN
她在唱歌。

SAM从墙边弹开。

SAM
你不要发神经。

两个人都静下来。ANN在床边坐下。

ANN
我今晚在你这边睡好吗？

SAM看着ANN。

13 INT. BEDROOM -MOMENTS LATER 13

SAM忽然醒来。

她转向ANN。
ANN还没入睡，她在低声哭泣。

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Dear Chui Mei,

I like the way you make things appear several times to introduce some connectivity into the movie - the broken door knobs, the security guards, the phone calls. These stuff paints a realistic daily life.

Certain details could be improved. It's very unlikely that when you switch on the radio, you would hear Indian music. Radio channels are usually properly preset these days. It would be more realistic to play some noisy rock music.

Had you written this script before The Six Senth and The Others (Nicole Kidman), you would've been a fucking genius.

Good luck to your film career. I'm sure you will get more and more awards.

steviee_boy [訪客] 2005-10-12 @ 21:28

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